The First Order

5/5 stars Loved the story Loved the MC Ren Loved the comedy and jokes too had me laughing from my heart Inshort loved everything about this story I would recommend this novel to everyone so they can feel the same joy and happiness i felt when i read Ren's journey and what an epic journey it was

5 Star no Drama. It was truly good read and concept. All side character been write so d*mn good. These not story about single man, but Hope of Humanity. I Declare, First Order.

6/02/25 I'm writing this review because I'm done. This is such a good book. It's severely underated. First, there were never any useless characters. Everyone who was introduced came around in some of the most unexpected ways. They each added to the story and went out with a bang. Except for a few characters who I felt author could have written a better ending with them. I'm looking at you Yang Anjing 👀. Continuing this point, the author never forgets or forgot as little as possible. Seriously I'll put him just underneath Cuttlefish in storytelling. There were a few flaws in my opinion. Particularly the last chapter and others. I feel like based on his writing style, there was a lot more he could've and probably wanted to add but couldn't. I don't know, I can't really tell but overall this is a pretty solid book. Its up there with RI, LOTM 1, Perfect Run and a few others. I rate this book a solid 4. 5 out of 5. If you love a good well written story, with intrigue and general gold tier quality, you'll love this book.

Sunday 26 January 2025 at 10:56 pm EST finished reading this masterpiece. I can't put into words what I am feeling right now after finishing this masterpiece. It wasn't one of the best Novels I have read, but still holds a place in my heart. The Novel had it's own flaws, but was at the same time perfect as it is. For anyone that is not sure if this is a good Novel, it is. Give it a try, you won't regret it.

Love the stories so much. One word can describe this whole story "war". I picked up this book because of spare me great Lord another book made by the author but by far this is his best work. The side characters were all attached to the story in some way and not just one off meanings, the mysteries behind our MC past was another enjoyable part of the story. If you like a book with comedy, mystery, action, superpowers not so much romance but there's still there a bit you'll love this one.

The ending left much to be desired BUT the journey to the ending was so much fun and I enjoyed the read a lot! I'd recommend this to anyone who loves humor, a monogamous romance, a fantastic supporting cast, and great world building with a great story to tell!

7/10 the ending alone is a huge bummer. It was rushed and it felt like it would be better if a bit more was added on. The quest system. . oh boy. Anyways a good read that is plague with a few issues and a terrible rush ending

I've read 130 chapters now and had to stop to give it a review. This novel is amazing, I've read hundreds of novels now and many I just get bored of and wait for different climaxs in the story or drop them sometimes, but this novel through every chapter so far has kept me fully interested every single minute. Which is bloody rare. I rate this novel to be near peak only because I haven't finished it I've only read 130 chapters but because of how good it's been I'm rating it already. It's been awesome.

Good plot, nice dialogues, no plot armor or plot holes and very well written comedy, at least that’s how it was at the beginning. Later it got worse, MC turned kinda dumb, even though he was introduced as very cunning and smart, at the beginning I just told myself that he was just inexperienced, but it didn’t really get better. And I wasn’t expecting a perfect MC, I never do, so don’t misunderstand me, he just made a few errors that a person with only average IQ wouldn’t even do. Still very well written story, just not what I was looking for at all when I started reading this, and it got hyped up in the comments, by a lot of people, and didn’t live up to the expectations…

Its a great book. Its a comedy, a slice of life , an action fantasy and a tragedy. The action scenes are very well described. The pace of the story is perfect.