HP: A Magical Journey

I’ll start by saying I could have given this 4 stars, but there are better novels out there, and 5 stars should only go to LOTM-level quality. The author’s writing style is genuinely enjoyable, and they deliver the story effectively. However, they struggle with character exploration and development, especially when it comes to female characters. The MC is a truly interesting character—calculative, deceitful, charming, kind (most of the time), and, best of all, not one of those overly heroic, self-sacrificing types. He has his priorities straight and places his family above everything else. The strongest aspect of this novel is the MC and his family. Their interactions are incredibly well-written and feel authentic. The romance, however, started with promise but was utterly ruined. And when I say ruined, I mean it literally—it became cheap, unrealistic, and ventured into wild, twisted fantasy territory. It was disappointing to see, especially since it had so much potential. I’ve tried to write this review without giving away any spoilers. Is it worth reading? Absolutely, 100%. Will you feel immersed in the Harry Potter world? Yes, definitely. But will it stay with you after you finish? Unfortunately, no. The plot, which initially seemed to be developing well, just disappeared, leaving us with the canon storyline. Some canon characters are written well, but others feel like a slap in the face to Rowling’s original work. A well-deserved 3/5.

Storytelling is good but plot is so-so . Considering this is just a side story not much to expect from plot . Plus points : auther knowns how to write story with alive and emotional characters and not some skinwalker like reincarnater with no attachment to the world and thinks everyone is pawn . Story not once make us feel that hes different from his peers he laughs with them , cry with them and care for them . Final words : do read ! Worth the time but don't expect anything other than Hogwarts

A masterful world expanding fanfic with plentiful original authentic experiences and characters full of life Besides a few minor preferences this is among the few amazing fanfictions that take a story/world and expand it and make it theirs At same level as: “Naruto: The wind calamity”

Quite an amazing read. I finished it while reading continuously for 4 days straight. the author according to me has perfectly satisfied my defination of what a fanfiction should be. although some parts were less that appeasing I still think this is the third best fanfic I have read till date. Very rarely have I seen an author who has so perfectly incorporated the canon with his own unique twist for that I give this author the " best fanfic of July 2024 award ". If anyone is still considering you have my permission to check it out you will not be disappointed.

A very satisfying read. exceptionally well written for a fan-fic. . or maybe just as a standalone web novel. . incredibly miffed that i hadn't found it sooner. growing up on the 7 books meant that i thoroughly enjoyed reading this. . . a few plotlines that i always thought should've been there in the original were there. . quite frankly perhaps one of maybe 2 or 3 books online where i wanted to read more. . the author's writing style was also to my taste. . the pacing was good. . exploring the lore was also appreciated. . i only wish that there had been 25 years later set of chapters . . Recommended.

I'm thrilled to share my glowing review for this exceptional Harry Potter fan fiction novel! This captivating story effortlessly transports readers back to the enchanting wizarding world we all adore. With masterful storytelling and impeccable character development, the author ingeniously weaves new adventures that seamlessly fit into J. K. Rowling's universe. From the spellbinding magic to the heartfelt friendships, every page is a testament to the author's dedication and creativity. Whether you're a die-hard fan or a casual reader, this fan fiction is an absolute must-read that will leave you spellbound and yearning for more magical tales.

I really like Author giving so much buildup but it left us with blue balls. I felt like the author had a part 2 in mind but was dropped, I really wished that he could have studied more magic and the magical world instead of following books. It also felt weird that he became like serial killer of death eaters , that was out of character with him. Also was there rally a neccesity to introduced throuple

The MC is a bit too perfect for my taste (if you don't count the arrogance), but it is fun to watch him grow in the aspects of magic and power. Though I have to say, the love interests are SO annoying which kinda ruins the story tbh (no offense). So if it was written without the romance, I'd give it a solid 4/5. And it was quite fun to watch the author's writing skills grow with time. So if you're starting to read this story, try to look past the - excuse my words - amateurish way of words, because it will get better the more you read.

i was hesitant at first since it was a fanfiction. But i got to say after reading it, it is just as good if not better than the original series

Not a big fan of Harry Potter but still, I love how the Author put the MC and his family background into the story. Well made I must say, much better compared to those LN and WN on the same genre. Hoping for a new Novel on your hands Author. Keep it up! I'll just support you spiritually.