24 Hearts

I'm on chapter 94. The book is very well written, very well written about all the elements. But not like a shadow slave or other summit novels. The reason is that the story doesn't feel fluid, the story tries to be multiple things like slice of life, harem, adventure, system novel, RPG elements, so the novel content feels too crowded and the novel doesn't flow. Also, the fact that most of the things in the novel are realistic and on track is very unusual and fun, but in other novels I'm used to different things happening suddenly and it felt like I was eating a dry meal.

Okay. I’m at 124, and I’m going to quit now. I think this story is… something. I think the mc’s identity before, and his decisions throughout are kinda… dumb. The mc has no empathy and I hate how he treats everything after the story starts. He isn’t really living, only progressing. The scaling of power is hard to grasp as the numbers are numerical but are large. They have a rating which would make you understand the significance, but when those numbers are the mc’s vs others he somehow has the advantage? Or doesn’t. That’s why it’s confusing. Most of the time the mc cares about the potential value vs what is had and he is blinded by it. It’s easy to read but hard to really enjoy, if it makes any sense. And there are tons of skills and such but it’s hard to understand them unless he explains them since you can’t really picture them, but he doesn’t explain all of them. And just the overall ‘mission’ in general is clear, but there are 24 parts. We are far far away from a conclusion

684 Chapters (Completed) in Raw

I just want to know, why must the MC be the creator of the game? Just why? the MC know nothing about the game he created, like a child that see the world for the first time, OK lets accept that he don't know anything about His World, he spent years reading every book in the library of the city he is residing in but even so we did not see any change. the MC was 20+ yrs old in his past life, his soul somehow was pulled to this game-world into a 7 years old body, but even so that did not change the fact that his soul is of that of a mature man. But it's a pity that maybe the emotions of the 7 yrs old dead soul affected him and turned him into 7 yrs old boy with a little knowledge about whats going on. his first lover, that is his teacher, showed a little mature personality at first, I really don't mind an MC with an older lover but he must have the qualification to do so, but our MC have nothing! He will be happy if she call him cute, pretty, or hug him, he's nothing but a little kid

Every single day I hope that someone will resume translating this novel. We were cheated out of something amazing.

Is this novel still alive?

I spoke literally an hour too soon, the tags ARE indeed there for a reason lmao

Looking at the tags I was expecting another conquers path, now I'm only 40 chapters in but I have to say that this was not what I was expecting, this is a very beautiful written novel, it's slow, but not boring slow but actually very engaging, the characters are likeable, and the mc is strangely likeable to, the way the system is shown is a bit weird but easy to look over, so far it's just beautifully written and likeable in every way, I love the atmosphere and am looking forward to later chapters so much, I'm interested to see the fated battle will work out, to me I'd rate it 10/10 so far as it's everything I love

Haha that summary tho.

Just got up to chapter 63 and I’m confused with what weapons the side characters use as they keep switching between swords spears and lances. The flying fighter girl had fuel swords right? It’s been referenced as a spear a lot And the blue knight girl has a shield and spear? Because normally it’s written as a spear or lance but this chapter she was talking about how she uses swords and seeing [the weirder of the sword] fight is helpful?? Thank you